Vicious Tornado
Sound of a freight train
A tornado's winds so strong
A storm so vicious
Destruction
A force so violent
Destruction so tremendous
Tornado so fierce
Saturday, April 25, 2009
Saturday, April 11, 2009
How to and poetry
For my how to I am doing how to make a tornado in a jar.
Materials:
Clear jar( mayonnaise or peanut butter jar)
Clear liquid soap
vinegar
water
glitter
food coloring
Process:
Fill jar about 3 quarters full of water
Add a teaspoon of liquid soap into the jar
Add the same amount of vinegar as well
Add two to four drops of food coloring and a 2 pinches of glitter into the jar
Explanation
The swirling motion gives the impression of a tornado and the glitter makes for the debris from the tornado.
Poem
The Jellybean Brigade
They came to town, they came to town,
the Jellybean Brigade.
They marched about in a bright array,
a rainbow on a parade.
They swaggered in the broiling sun,
instead of in the shade.
They're nothing but a puddle now-
the Jellybean Brigade.
I could use poetry in the classroom to introduce and activity. Whether it be writing or possible a math or social studies lesson. This particular poem I thought about using it for possible a math lesson. It talks about jellybeans and they are different colors, so the students would sort them according to color. Or they could practiced their adding and subtracting skills with the jellybeans. Reading this poem to them would get them excited about the lesson and a way of introducing the lesson.
Materials:
Clear jar( mayonnaise or peanut butter jar)
Clear liquid soap
vinegar
water
glitter
food coloring
Process:
Fill jar about 3 quarters full of water
Add a teaspoon of liquid soap into the jar
Add the same amount of vinegar as well
Add two to four drops of food coloring and a 2 pinches of glitter into the jar
Explanation
The swirling motion gives the impression of a tornado and the glitter makes for the debris from the tornado.
Poem
The Jellybean Brigade
They came to town, they came to town,
the Jellybean Brigade.
They marched about in a bright array,
a rainbow on a parade.
They swaggered in the broiling sun,
instead of in the shade.
They're nothing but a puddle now-
the Jellybean Brigade.
I could use poetry in the classroom to introduce and activity. Whether it be writing or possible a math or social studies lesson. This particular poem I thought about using it for possible a math lesson. It talks about jellybeans and they are different colors, so the students would sort them according to color. Or they could practiced their adding and subtracting skills with the jellybeans. Reading this poem to them would get them excited about the lesson and a way of introducing the lesson.
Sunday, April 5, 2009
narrative writing
Narrative writing is very important in the development of a child's writing skills. It helps the children bring out their imagination and their creative skills. It also helps a child feel confident in their writing abilities.
Narrative writing tells a story about a certain event that may have happened in the child's life. It also shows a sequence of events over time and portrays a clear beginning, middle and end to it. Most children forget to write an end to the story. The middle part has to have vivid details making the story real and creating an image in the reader's head. When writing a narrative story, it has to have an audience other than the writer. Most importantly it has to have a hook in order to make someone interested in reading it.
I really enjoyed the writing workshop we did. It helped me in writing my expository story and gave me great ideas in making better. A writing workshop consists of a group of people, preferably 4. One person then reads their story while the others listen carefully to the paper. After the person is done reading their paper, the members will comment on the paper giving suggestions and feedback to the writer. A way of commenting would be the Sandwich Theory, which is the member of the group tells the writer what they like about story, then asks a question or make a suggestion for or about the paper, finally the member makes a positive comment on the paper. During this workshop, there is no need for editing at the moment.
Narrative writing is probably the most hardest for me, because I have to be creative, which I am not. But doing the writing workshop seems to me that will make it easier for me to write it, because I can get feedback from my peers.
Narrative writing tells a story about a certain event that may have happened in the child's life. It also shows a sequence of events over time and portrays a clear beginning, middle and end to it. Most children forget to write an end to the story. The middle part has to have vivid details making the story real and creating an image in the reader's head. When writing a narrative story, it has to have an audience other than the writer. Most importantly it has to have a hook in order to make someone interested in reading it.
I really enjoyed the writing workshop we did. It helped me in writing my expository story and gave me great ideas in making better. A writing workshop consists of a group of people, preferably 4. One person then reads their story while the others listen carefully to the paper. After the person is done reading their paper, the members will comment on the paper giving suggestions and feedback to the writer. A way of commenting would be the Sandwich Theory, which is the member of the group tells the writer what they like about story, then asks a question or make a suggestion for or about the paper, finally the member makes a positive comment on the paper. During this workshop, there is no need for editing at the moment.
Narrative writing is probably the most hardest for me, because I have to be creative, which I am not. But doing the writing workshop seems to me that will make it easier for me to write it, because I can get feedback from my peers.
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