Saturday, April 25, 2009

Descriptive

Vicious Tornado
Sound of a freight train
A tornado's winds so strong
A storm so vicious

Destruction
A force so violent
Destruction so tremendous
Tornado so fierce

4 comments:

  1. Two great haiku's! Excellent job on descibing the tornado and its outcome!

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  2. I like how your poem relays the terrible destructiveness of a tornado. I used to live in Oklahome, tornado alley, and your words bring a stark reality to what a tornado is.

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  3. Your poems are very self explanatory and well written. Great Job!!!

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  4. Wow! That was a cool way to write your poem!

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